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Backpacker Magazine – October 2012

Worst Nightmare: Entwined

A hair-raising tale of wilderness terror that will haunt your backcountry dreams

by: Dennis Lewon

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“I’ll pack the food,” she’d told Paul. She wanted everything to be just right. The place. The meal. The reflection in the lake. She smiled to herself when she realized this must be what men go through when they plan to propose. And really, wasn’t she planning a proposal of sorts? She was pregnant. She was pregnant and they had just graduated from college. What else would they do? She would tell him under the magnificent summer stars.

“Watch your step,” Paul said as they hiked up the canyon toward the spur to Diamond Lake, “these rocks are slick.” They’d come six miles, and had just another mile to go. But the scene didn’t match Amy’s vision. A light rain obscured the view of the mountains. And when they reached the river crossing, the water level was much higher than on their previous visit. Had it rained hard higher up? Paul stopped and surveyed the river from a streamside rock. The waist-deep water ran fast and loud, so Paul had to raise his voice.

“The current is too strong,” he shouted, “We need to go back.” It was obvious Paul was right. But Amy felt devastated. Would everything be different if she couldn’t tell him at Diamond Lake? She’d packed smoked salmon! Still, she nodded agreement and started to turn. Then, without thinking, she turned back to face Paul, who was still standing on a rock above the current.

“We’re going to have a baby,” she blurted.

“What…” Paul said, and instinctively took a step backward, like he needed more space to understand the words. But there wasn’t enough rock behind him. Paul’s right foot landed on the wet, sloped edge of the boulder and slipped off. He teetered on his left foot for a second while Amy watched in horror, then his weight passed the tipping point and he plunged into the current. “Paul!” Amy screamed.


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READERS COMMENTS

Greg
Oct 29, 2012

Sounds like an excerpt from a trashy romance novel--please don't make-up any more of these pseudo outdoor "dramas".

Amy & Paul's Baby
Oct 29, 2012

I miss my dad. Too bad he had to go and marry that stupid tree. What a weirdo!

sr
Oct 28, 2012

Why does every story in this article feel like it's written by an over-dramatic 5th grader?

Kevin
Oct 28, 2012

it is obvious he died, this is a halloween story afterall

Dennis
Oct 27, 2012

Hey editors come on finish this story you can't leave us up in the air like this !!!!

Patty
Oct 26, 2012

What happened???? Did he live?????????????

Miguel
Oct 26, 2012

Wow this story is so sad :( I thought I will have a happy end.

Jerry G
Oct 26, 2012

ANOTHER BROKEN LINK!!!!

GOOD LORD...

Jean-Claude
Oct 26, 2012

ok,
I'm seeing a pattern here...one that I don't like...why write a story with no ending...lame...

Fix the site
Oct 26, 2012

Ummm...page 3 is the same as page 2. What happened at the end? Did he live? Die?

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